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Thursday, 7 May 2020

An Unexpected Adventure



In a blink of an eye she was in the sea. Using the curtains of her bathtub, it was easy to sail. She could see lots of sea creatures around her and it was like the water from the bathtub was filling the sea. Then when she looked down and saw the bathtub was leaking, without hesitation she jumped into the water and to her surprise she could actually breathe underwater just like a mermaid. She started to swim and she suddenly saw a golden light shine upon her, but it was gone immediately. An adventure was just about to begin ……...

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4 comments:

  1. Annie Spratt8 May 2020 at 09:04

    Kia ora Minhan. As you know, I really like this story! It's short but it really does the job. It would be good if your character had a name. I would love to hear more about her adventure.

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  2. Shelly Matheson11 May 2020 at 09:49

    Wow, Minhan. This is a pretty powerful bit of writing.....Is there a part 2 when the adventure begins?

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  3. Anonymous11 May 2020 at 10:53

    Hi minhan, that was an interesting story! it would be great if you can write more.

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  4. Anonymous21 May 2020 at 10:17

    Hello Minhan,Your is amazing and interesting. Your story reminds me of my story,it’s similar to yours.Maybe you could make a part two.

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